Took TSB with me to church on Sunday and hid in the library. Got about a chapter red marked. Getting ideas where to insert the extra scenes I wrote.

Goals for this week:

Work on TSB at least an hour a day

Work in at least 1 extra scene where I marked it during my read yesterday

Write 1 new scene

Try to remember that character's are "real people" and have hopes, dreams, goals, fears, and histories rather than letting things happen to them ala "Deus Ex Machina"